Outside at a friend’s party in Pleasanton to see tonight’s sunset.
On the patio after the stunning view. I’m thinking of the changes I need to make on one page in my novel before tomorrow morning. It’s the last day of Jessica Barksdale’s writing retreat. Each participant will read a revision of a page that needs clarification. My assignment is where I wrote that Jill’s sister inherited the family home. People wondered why Jill didn’t get half of the inheritance. The real reason is explained several chapters later, but Jessica suggested I at least write how Jill felt about it.
Back to work on it at midnight.
Wow! Nice view and don’t you look lovely in firelight. Hope the retreat has veen all you hoped for.
Thanks, Lady Ann. Retreat was better than what I hoped for.