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Hada’s Fog Chapter 9

Hada's Fog

Hada’s Fog

Hada’s Fog, Chapter 9, Scene One is posted (Click on  menu above).

Hada’s goal continues to be a quick return to New Jersey. In this chapter, obstacles block her. The problem Lev foresaw is greater than anticipated and he needs more time in Berkeley.

Hada remembers when Lev disciplined Samuel during  the boys’ high school years. She still wonders what he said to them then and what he plans to do now. He is keeping information from her again.

Flashbacks are scenes and relate to the present action. The transitions from present to past and back to present should be smooth and clear.


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