Time to Write Now By Julaina Kleist-Corwin

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Hada’s Fog New Chapter Posted and Comments About Sense of Taste

Hada's Fog

Hada’s Fog

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Chapter Ten, Scene One of Hada’s Fog is posted (see blog menu above).

 

 

Lev asks his daughter-in-law for information he needs to help Abe. Hada’s mood makes breakfast uncomfortable at the hotel. She’s still angry about Lev’s rules.  The opportunity to add the sense of taste in fiction is often missed. In my earlier drafts, I didn’t specify what Lev and Hada ate, but this time, I did. At first I wrote eggs and toast, but I thought oatmeal would be more healthy for their hearts.

Besides food and drink, what sense of taste have you used in your writing?

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